منتدى مدينة الملوك - مديرية جبن
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Like no Other

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ابو رائد جمال علي مجلي
احمد الويسي
kareemah
yemengirl
AL-MATTAR
ابو ريهام
علي أحمد جيلان
قاسم محمد واصل
Jasmine
المتفائل
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descriptionLike no Other EmptyLike no Otherالثلاثاء 17 فبراير 2009, 1:24 pm

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In the name of Allah the most merciful the especially merciful

This poem is one of my many tries
to write poems in english
and I wrote it about my niece
who my love to her is undescribeable
by words
and because she is from the rare kind of people
I called this poem


((like no other))

I have a niece
who is like no other
she is the light of my eyes
that will stay forever
her warm laughs and smiles
turn my cold winter nights to summer
I feel clam and in peace
whenever I'm with her
I looked in Rome and greece
and found no one better
because she is Allah's masterpiece
who was made to be
like no Other

I hope you all like it

Al salamu alikom

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالثلاثاء 17 فبراير 2009, 1:53 pm

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Thank you SO much!!! This is a BEAUTIFUL poem!!! Better than mines! I wish I had an uncle like you!!!! Thanks for sharing with us, and I think your niece is not going to like it. . . SHE'S GOING TO LOVE IT
Wink

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالثلاثاء 17 فبراير 2009, 2:08 pm

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المبدع مبدع أخي أبو جمال بالأنجليزي ولا بالعربي
مشكور يا ابو جمال على هذه القصيدة الرائعة
ومنتظرين جديدك القادم عربياً او غربياً
تقبل تحياتي

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالثلاثاء 17 فبراير 2009, 10:37 pm

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Jasmine كتب:
Thank you SO much!!! This is a BEAUTIFUL poem!!! Better than mines! I wish I had an uncle like you!!!! Thanks for sharing with us, and I think your niece is not going to like it. . . SHE'S GOING TO LOVE IT
Wink



well, let me first say that
I'm very glad that you liked it
and I hope she does love it too
then, to what you write I'm just a beginner
and I'm learning a lot from you
thank you sister for passing by
may Allah rewards you Al Jannah
aameen

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالجمعة 20 فبراير 2009, 8:08 am

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nice poem

I hope in the future that ur
going 2 b a great English poet

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالجمعة 20 فبراير 2009, 4:39 pm

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a great feeling like this can be discribed in any way

but when this feelings get to a point of writing a poem

it really means a lot and maybe the way is not that great

but it would when it gets to that person whom its for


i give you a thumb up for this beautiful poem

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالإثنين 23 فبراير 2009, 9:39 am

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قاسم محمد واصل كتب:
المبدع مبدع أخي أبو جمال بالأنجليزي ولا بالعربي
مشكور يا ابو جمال على هذه القصيدة الرائعة
ومنتظرين جديدك القادم عربياً او غربياً
تقبل تحياتي


رغم اني مقدر حاكا عربي في قسم الانجليزي
حقي العربي يقع ظيعف
بس يالله اجلك
شكراُ على المرور المشجع
الله يوفقك ويسدد على طريق الخير خُطاك

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالإثنين 23 فبراير 2009, 9:43 am

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علي أحمد جيلان كتب:

nice poem

I hope in the future that ur
going 2 b a great English poet



I hope so 2 !
thank you so much for your encourging comments
and May Allah makes you be what you want to be in the future
in no time
Thanks again

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالإثنين 23 فبراير 2009, 9:50 am

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ابو ريهام كتب:
a great feeling like this can be discribed in any way

but when this feelings get to a point of writing a poem

it really means a lot and maybe the way is not that great

but it would when it gets to that person whom its for


i give you a thumb up for this beautiful poem


I'm very pleased to see your comment on this page
and I always liked your critical thinking which is always
very thoughtful and well formulated
Thank you

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالإثنين 23 فبراير 2009, 9:54 am

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nice poem

thank you borther

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالخميس 12 مارس 2009, 1:58 am

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slam
this really a nice poem with no doubt
and you like no other

may Allah bless you
and good luck

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالأحد 12 أبريل 2009, 11:11 am

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This is a beautiful poem ma sha Allah. I would think you copied it if you didn't say it was yours.

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالخميس 16 أبريل 2009, 4:33 am

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brother
she should be very thankful that she is having an uncle like no other
(actually "they" should be thankful not she)

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالخميس 23 أبريل 2009, 12:12 pm

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It is a very nice poem, may allah be with you.) )
(ماشاء الله عليكم كنتم واحدصرتواثنين حفظكم الله مع تمنياتنالكم كل الموفقيه ياالعزيزالمتفائل)

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالجمعة 24 أبريل 2009, 10:18 am

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AL-MATTAR كتب:
nice poem

thank you borther



Thank you brother for your supportive comment
it is very appreciated

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالجمعة 24 أبريل 2009, 10:22 am

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yemengirl كتب:


slam
this really a nice poem with no doubt
and you like no other

may Allah bless you
and good luck



I am very garateful that you passed on my poem
Thank you very much
may Allah(SWT) gives you the good luck
in this world in the the hereafter

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالجمعة 24 أبريل 2009, 10:25 am

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kareemah كتب:
This is a beautiful poem ma sha Allah. I would think you copied it if you didn't say it was yours.


Kareemah
this is how all Yemenese refer to thier sisters
May Allah (SWT) makes your life as your name
Kareemah

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالجمعة 24 أبريل 2009, 10:28 am

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احمد الويسي كتب:
brother
she should be very thankful that she is having an uncle like no other
(actually "they" should be thankful not she)


I have no idea of what you're trying to say
but I'm sure it's meaningful
As they to me means she , meaning ONE!
thank my beloved

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالجمعة 24 أبريل 2009, 10:32 am

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ابو رائد جمال علي مجلي كتب:

It is a very nice poem, may allah be with you.) )
(ماشاء الله عليكم كنتم واحدصرتواثنين حفظكم الله مع تمنياتنالكم كل الموفقيه ياالعزيزالمتفائل)



Uncle Jamal
I thank you so much for your continuos support
I am truely honored by every letter you have written
I hope to see you soon
Abu Jamal

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالأحد 26 أبريل 2009, 2:43 pm

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ايش الحركات Cool Cool


متفائل مبدع وكلامك كله مقنع
ايش رايك في هذا الشعر



عاد احنا منتظرين الغه الاسبانيه
لازم تعلمنا شويه ياجوير

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالسبت 02 مايو 2009, 11:03 pm

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A very wonderful poem about your niece."It seems that you like her so much".

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالأحد 03 مايو 2009, 12:12 pm

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المتفائل كتب:
احمد الويسي كتب:
brother
she should be very thankful that she is having an uncle like no other
(actually "they" should be thankful not she)


I have no idea of what you're trying to say
but I'm sure it's meaningful
As they to me means she , meaning ONE!
thank my beloved


Well, the free gets it while it's flying and the .... reffasssss

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالثلاثاء 19 مايو 2009, 3:26 pm

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This is amazing !!!
your poem is more than wonderful
I didn't know that you are skillful in English poem as you are in Arabic poem
May Allah bless you and your niece

descriptionLike no Other Emptyرد: Like no Otherالأربعاء 03 يونيو 2009, 12:17 pm

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very nice poem

good luck bro
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